西安高新雅思口语5.5分part3回答举例
概述:西安高新雅思口语5.5分,西安高新雅思口语6.5分班,雅思口语Part3的常见题型是“Why”,甚至有些考生在Part1就会被考官问蒙,很多考生觉得考官是在故意刁难。
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西安高新雅思口语5.5分,西安高新雅思口语6.5分班,雅思口语Part3的常见题型是“Why”,甚至有些考生在Part1就会被考官问蒙,很多考生觉得考官是在故意刁难。
其实,考官是在帮你。
TA只是想看看你在“表达详尽”“词汇丰富”“语法多样”等方面还有什么“好货”没show给TA,好给你在各项评分标准上再撩个0.5之类。
被why卡住的考生,要么是准备不充分,没有刷过题库,缺乏相关知识储备,倒是上一题没回答详尽,要么是思路受限,难以展示出自然的对话能力。
本期,搬运Simon网站不同话题的原因类考题及其回答范文并进行分析,供大家学习参考。
下划线和斜体分别是组长认为有助于提升表达的连接性短语和话题相关词,大家可以自行积累更多。
1.Why do you think some people prefer not to tell others about their achievements?
I imagine that people have different reasons for keeping their achievements to themselves. One reason could be that some people don't like to show off or draw attention to themselves. Other people perhaps don't value their own accomplishments because they are constantly aiming at even bigger goals. Finally, I suppose that many of us are so busy that we don't stop to savour the moment; maybe we need to slow down and enjoy our successes.
我觉得人们不公开自己的成就有不同的原因。一个是一些人不喜欢显摆或吸引注意力。其他人不觉得自己的成就有多厉害,因为他们总是有更大的目标。最后,我觉得很多人可能太忙了以至于没空品味那个时刻,可能我们需要慢下来去享受自己的成功。
解析:第一句是套句,最好在需要思考原因的时候先说出来,用于给自己争取思考时间,如果一下子就能想到原因,还是直接说即可。回答结构是总分,前两个观点是他人的原因,最后小结给出自己的观点并给出推测性回答(maybe)。第一个原因背后的逻辑链条是“为什么不公开?——公开了会得到关注——有些人不想得到关注(个人意愿)”,第二个原因背后的逻辑链条是“为什么不公开?——没什么好公开的(否定回答)”。词汇方面,题目中有prefer not to的否定表达,回答里也使用了don't like to , don't value, don't stop to 等对应表达,题中的achievements在回答中被替换成了accomplishments, bigger goals(近义),successes等。语法方面,使用了情态动词、进行时、so...that句式、比较级等。
2.Could you suggest some reasons why some people are deciding to reduce their use of technology?
Yes,I think the main reasons are that people feel overwhelmed or that their use of technology is becoming unhealthy. Some people have realised that all the devices and applications that they use are making their lives more complicated and stressful than necessary. Others might see themselves becoming addicted to checking their phones, or wasting too much time on their social media pages. I try to limit my own use of my phone and laptop because I want to spend more of my time in the 'real world' than on the Internet.
是的,我觉得主要原因是人们觉得不堪重负或不健康。一些人已经意识到他们用的各种的设备和应用正在让他们的生活变得不必要的复杂和有压力。其他人可能发觉自己越来越对手机上瘾,或者花太多时间在社交媒体页面。我试图限制自己用手机和电脑因为我想花更多时间在真实世界而不是网络。
解析:如果一下子就能想到原因,就直接说,像这个回答的第一句那样。回答结构是总分总,前两个观点是他人的可能看法,最后小结给出自己的理由。第一种观点相对抽象一点,第二个观点比较具体,但其实都是很容易想到的观点。个人理由的思路是“我不想做这个因为我想做那个”。词汇方面,题目中有technology,回答用devices, applications, phones, social media pages, laptop等进行了拓展,语法方面,使用了宾语从句、进行时、比较级、情态动词等。
3. Why do you think employees sometimes don't provide good customer service?
When employees’treatment of customers isn’t good, I think it’s usually because they are unhappy doing their jobs. This might be because they are treated badly by their managers, or because they haven’t been encouraged to take pride in their work. I remember in my first ever job, for example, I didn't like the work that I was given, and so I probably wasn’t as thoughtful or attentive as I should have been when I had to speak to customers.
当雇员对客户不好的时候,我想通常是因为他们不喜欢自己的工作。这可能是因为他们的老板对他们不好,或者他们没有被鼓励去为自己的工作感到骄傲。我记得我的第一份工作,我不喜欢被分配的任务,所以当我需要面对客户的时候我很可能没做到应该做到的体谅和专注。
解析:这个回答的结构是“应题—解释—举例”。第一句用状语从句开头,转述了题目,展示了话题相关词汇,给自己争取了思考时间。第二句从“个人感受”角度出发进行原因推测,不好好工作是因为不开心(多么日常又普遍的理由)。第三句继续解释为什么不开心,也是很容易想到的原因,难点在于你可能不会准确表达“老板对我不好”和“我对工作爱不起来”。第四句用自己的经验举例,展示了话题相关词汇。语法方面使用了各种从句、情态动词、被动语态、现在完成时、一般过去时等。
4. Why do some people like to live near rivers, lakes or the sea?
Well,the view is probably a major factor; most people like to look out to sea, or across a river or lake. I'd much prefer to look out of my window onto a natural landscape than an apartment building in a city. Then there's the lifestyle: if you live by the sea, for example, you can lie on the beach, go for a swim, or do water sports like surfing or waterskiing. I definitely wouldn't mind living near a beach at some point in my life!
景色很可能是主要原因,多数人喜欢看海,或河,或湖。我更喜欢从窗子看出去是自然风景而不是城市里的公寓楼。然后是生活方式,如果你住在海边,比如,就可以躺在沙滩上,去游泳,或做水上运动像冲浪或滑水。我绝对不介意住在有沙滩的地方!
解析:这个回答的结构是“原因1-个人爱好-原因2-解释-举例-个人想法”。第一句相对来说是中国考生不常用的表达,多数人习惯说“原因是A”而不是“A是原因”,从现在起可以在练习回答这类题目的时候使用新的句式。从内容看,“风景”和“生活方式”是与话题相关的、很自然可以想到的原因。这个回答最值得学习的是对话题内容的拓展,包括看风景、看什么风景,做一些活动,什么活动,既丰富了回答又展示了词汇。
5. Why do you think men tend to show their emotions less than women?
Maybe it’s because of the way we are brought up. I think that boys are often taught from an early age not to cry. Also, boys are aware that their friends might see it as a sign of weakness if they show their feelings. Perhaps girls are brought up to be more sensitive to their friends' feelings.
可能这是因为我们的教养方式。我觉得通常男孩从小被教不要哭。而且,他们觉得如果表达自己的感觉,他们的朋友会认为哭是弱的标志。或许女孩的教养方式使她们可以对朋友的感觉更敏感。
解析:不确定语气的使用,是雅思口语回答的“加分项”,因为更自然、合理。这个回答的开始给出了可能的原因,然后根据题目内容,从男孩和女孩两个方面分别进行了解释。注意词汇替换: show their emotions=show their feelings,less=more sensitive。语法方面使用了被动语态、if句、比较级等。
其实,考官是在帮你。
TA只是想看看你在“表达详尽”“词汇丰富”“语法多样”等方面还有什么“好货”没show给TA,好给你在各项评分标准上再撩个0.5之类。
被why卡住的考生,要么是准备不充分,没有刷过题库,缺乏相关知识储备,倒是上一题没回答详尽,要么是思路受限,难以展示出自然的对话能力。
本期,搬运Simon网站不同话题的原因类考题及其回答范文并进行分析,供大家学习参考。
下划线和斜体分别是组长认为有助于提升表达的连接性短语和话题相关词,大家可以自行积累更多。
1.Why do you think some people prefer not to tell others about their achievements?
I imagine that people have different reasons for keeping their achievements to themselves. One reason could be that some people don't like to show off or draw attention to themselves. Other people perhaps don't value their own accomplishments because they are constantly aiming at even bigger goals. Finally, I suppose that many of us are so busy that we don't stop to savour the moment; maybe we need to slow down and enjoy our successes.
我觉得人们不公开自己的成就有不同的原因。一个是一些人不喜欢显摆或吸引注意力。其他人不觉得自己的成就有多厉害,因为他们总是有更大的目标。最后,我觉得很多人可能太忙了以至于没空品味那个时刻,可能我们需要慢下来去享受自己的成功。
解析:第一句是套句,最好在需要思考原因的时候先说出来,用于给自己争取思考时间,如果一下子就能想到原因,还是直接说即可。回答结构是总分,前两个观点是他人的原因,最后小结给出自己的观点并给出推测性回答(maybe)。第一个原因背后的逻辑链条是“为什么不公开?——公开了会得到关注——有些人不想得到关注(个人意愿)”,第二个原因背后的逻辑链条是“为什么不公开?——没什么好公开的(否定回答)”。词汇方面,题目中有prefer not to的否定表达,回答里也使用了don't like to , don't value, don't stop to 等对应表达,题中的achievements在回答中被替换成了accomplishments, bigger goals(近义),successes等。语法方面,使用了情态动词、进行时、so...that句式、比较级等。
2.Could you suggest some reasons why some people are deciding to reduce their use of technology?
Yes,I think the main reasons are that people feel overwhelmed or that their use of technology is becoming unhealthy. Some people have realised that all the devices and applications that they use are making their lives more complicated and stressful than necessary. Others might see themselves becoming addicted to checking their phones, or wasting too much time on their social media pages. I try to limit my own use of my phone and laptop because I want to spend more of my time in the 'real world' than on the Internet.
是的,我觉得主要原因是人们觉得不堪重负或不健康。一些人已经意识到他们用的各种的设备和应用正在让他们的生活变得不必要的复杂和有压力。其他人可能发觉自己越来越对手机上瘾,或者花太多时间在社交媒体页面。我试图限制自己用手机和电脑因为我想花更多时间在真实世界而不是网络。
解析:如果一下子就能想到原因,就直接说,像这个回答的第一句那样。回答结构是总分总,前两个观点是他人的可能看法,最后小结给出自己的理由。第一种观点相对抽象一点,第二个观点比较具体,但其实都是很容易想到的观点。个人理由的思路是“我不想做这个因为我想做那个”。词汇方面,题目中有technology,回答用devices, applications, phones, social media pages, laptop等进行了拓展,语法方面,使用了宾语从句、进行时、比较级、情态动词等。
3. Why do you think employees sometimes don't provide good customer service?
When employees’treatment of customers isn’t good, I think it’s usually because they are unhappy doing their jobs. This might be because they are treated badly by their managers, or because they haven’t been encouraged to take pride in their work. I remember in my first ever job, for example, I didn't like the work that I was given, and so I probably wasn’t as thoughtful or attentive as I should have been when I had to speak to customers.
当雇员对客户不好的时候,我想通常是因为他们不喜欢自己的工作。这可能是因为他们的老板对他们不好,或者他们没有被鼓励去为自己的工作感到骄傲。我记得我的第一份工作,我不喜欢被分配的任务,所以当我需要面对客户的时候我很可能没做到应该做到的体谅和专注。
解析:这个回答的结构是“应题—解释—举例”。第一句用状语从句开头,转述了题目,展示了话题相关词汇,给自己争取了思考时间。第二句从“个人感受”角度出发进行原因推测,不好好工作是因为不开心(多么日常又普遍的理由)。第三句继续解释为什么不开心,也是很容易想到的原因,难点在于你可能不会准确表达“老板对我不好”和“我对工作爱不起来”。第四句用自己的经验举例,展示了话题相关词汇。语法方面使用了各种从句、情态动词、被动语态、现在完成时、一般过去时等。
4. Why do some people like to live near rivers, lakes or the sea?
Well,the view is probably a major factor; most people like to look out to sea, or across a river or lake. I'd much prefer to look out of my window onto a natural landscape than an apartment building in a city. Then there's the lifestyle: if you live by the sea, for example, you can lie on the beach, go for a swim, or do water sports like surfing or waterskiing. I definitely wouldn't mind living near a beach at some point in my life!
景色很可能是主要原因,多数人喜欢看海,或河,或湖。我更喜欢从窗子看出去是自然风景而不是城市里的公寓楼。然后是生活方式,如果你住在海边,比如,就可以躺在沙滩上,去游泳,或做水上运动像冲浪或滑水。我绝对不介意住在有沙滩的地方!
解析:这个回答的结构是“原因1-个人爱好-原因2-解释-举例-个人想法”。第一句相对来说是中国考生不常用的表达,多数人习惯说“原因是A”而不是“A是原因”,从现在起可以在练习回答这类题目的时候使用新的句式。从内容看,“风景”和“生活方式”是与话题相关的、很自然可以想到的原因。这个回答最值得学习的是对话题内容的拓展,包括看风景、看什么风景,做一些活动,什么活动,既丰富了回答又展示了词汇。
5. Why do you think men tend to show their emotions less than women?
Maybe it’s because of the way we are brought up. I think that boys are often taught from an early age not to cry. Also, boys are aware that their friends might see it as a sign of weakness if they show their feelings. Perhaps girls are brought up to be more sensitive to their friends' feelings.
可能这是因为我们的教养方式。我觉得通常男孩从小被教不要哭。而且,他们觉得如果表达自己的感觉,他们的朋友会认为哭是弱的标志。或许女孩的教养方式使她们可以对朋友的感觉更敏感。
解析:不确定语气的使用,是雅思口语回答的“加分项”,因为更自然、合理。这个回答的开始给出了可能的原因,然后根据题目内容,从男孩和女孩两个方面分别进行了解释。注意词汇替换: show their emotions=show their feelings,less=more sensitive。语法方面使用了被动语态、if句、比较级等。
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